Reviews For Distraction.
Name: Flame (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2012 08:48 pm · For: Chapter 4
I have enjoyed reading these chapters. You have a very unique and almost raw storyline, and it's easy to feel drawn into the eroticism of it all. I enjoyed it, and look forward to more in the future.
Author's Response: I am really glad you liked it :) I am happy you liked my take on some slash
Name: SirenofSaturn (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2011 07:01 am · For: Chapter 4
Lol, I responded to your review a few minutes ago asking for an update and here it is. Oh I love how these two can blow hot and cold, and I often theorized that Armand as PTSD from his time in the brothel. I think you did his confusion well. Very nice!
Author's Response: I am glad you liked it!!! I always thought of him as having ptsd as well. I know you made me get off my butt and write. Once we both finish our respective stories, I would love to write one with you.....if you want. I can not wait for your Amarnd/Marius chapter as well! So hurry your butt up and write.
Name: SirenofSaturn (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2011 04:34 pm · For: Chapter 1
Interesting. Marius is almost comical in his possession, but it just shows how much he still thinks of his Amadeo as that, HIS child....though child is not the word for how he views him. I like the format now. Good work!
Author's Response: I am glad you are still enjoying the story hit some writer's block but should have more as soon as I can pull something out of my brain.
Name: SirenofSaturn (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2011 01:55 am · For: Chapter 2
Simply decadent. I think even more decadent than triple chocolate cheese cake.
Oh our dear immortal teen has submitted his body, but will his will, and judgement suffer when it comes out of his lustful haze?
A small suggestion darling, perhaps separating your paragraphs, would make it easier to read, but otherwise wonderful work! Please give us more!!
Author's Response: I will do my best to give you more. I will take your advice about the paragraphs, grammar was never my strong suit. But I will have more soon!
Name: SirenofSaturn (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2011 06:28 pm · For: Chapter 1
I think this is very promising!
The complexity of Armand with both his old and new loves has always fascinated me. You know deep inside he's torn as to be the submissive student of years ago, or the dominant coven master who led Daniel for a decade; and I think you've captured that. Please continue...it's...delicious. Lol
Author's Response: That means a lot coming from you because I enjoy your work. :) I will try to give some more "delicious" story as soon as I can.